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gail

I would say the parody field is wide open here.

Carin

This is just to say

I turned on
the hot water
in the kitchen
while you
showered

And flushed
all the toilets
twice

Forgive me
but you kept me awake
with your snoring
last night

gail

nice

Carin

You know, it's just the artist in me, screaming to get out. I just really want to explore the space. The space of this little comment box.

maggie katzen

abusing cats!? i'm going to have to de-link you now!

gail

That's awful moralistic for a SLUG MURDERER. . . . . .;)

Ana

This is just to say

I have left
the car
on empty
again tonight

Tommorow
There's a meeting
You hope to be
on time

Do not
Be angry
You always cut it
close
So it's
Your own damned fault

Ana

Mmmmm. Didn't get the uppercase lowercase thing right. Let's try again:

This is just to say

I have left
The car
On empty
Again tonight

Tommorow
There's a meeting
You hope to be
On time

Do not
Be angry
You always cut it
Close
So it's
Your own damned fault


Mmmmm. Not muscle-y enough. Too many articles.

gail

I just posted the original, but if you tighten it up, I'll repost.

gail

Something like,

Your meeting tomorrow
Is early

You always cut it close.
It's your own damned fault.

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