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Ana

Nutella finished
smirk of choc-lit happiness
eaten from the jar

yours was prettier, but the Nutella jar is just sitting here so...

gail

Have you had Nutella on a banana?

CraigC

I look at the stars
Some day this will be gone
And the morn will break

CraigC

Damn, damn, damn. Thought of soemething better after I posted.

CraigC

Whoops. Second line was six, anyway.

CraigC

I rail at the stars
They mock me with their twinkling
Some day morn will break

gail

That's definitely better.

CraigC

Oh ballbreaking moon and ridiculing stars
The older I get, the closer you are
Don't you have somewhere that you need to be
Instead of hanging here making a fool of me

gail

If you want to use the first one, though, you could just add "all" to the second line:

Some day all this will be gone.

Ana

I got Pat Boone singing Stairway to Heaven here:

http://www.daveamason.com/april/mp3/Boonestair%2Emp3

For the love of all that's holy.

I think that this was via Dorka.

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